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Potatoes

Sun Sep 27, 2009, 5:47 PM
Hello.

I've been rearranging.

The world just fell through my door,
and it's making a mess of my neat little shack.
You flowers out there stay away
I'll eat you
with fried Amenita Mysterium

Oh, to be digested!
What pleasure to tear us apart!

Here's a poem I wrote for you.
If you've seen anything out there
that shines out the sun
recently or otherwise
please leave it for me
I'll plant it in the garden
and sell you the fruit.

(9on the cheap0)



-Lee R. D. G.





Potatoes


Robots have overtaken the yard.
My house is a cage.

Out there in threatening blue
thunderheads the sun sculpts
rainbow




Theory:meditation hums us
down with the mountains.
No more pilgrims chewing oat.

My thunk tank has ingested itself.
Methinks thought may be bored.
How do we save it, poor thought?

In the cellar again,
shoots of stellar activity
crawl along the walls.
A stranger has been in.
I know by the shadows
of his shy step.

What is it about us
that we feel
when we think
what we breathe
why dust where went the sun?
Spooks smoke.

Holes leave heavy heads.
Still none of us are dead.

Down here fingers poke through.
Strange, how they grow
long eyes in the dark.

  • Mood: Worried
  • Listening to: Mechanically separated automobiles
  • Reading: Cracking the Cosmic Egg
  • Watching: JCVD
  • Playing: and yanking?.
  • Eating: Venison sausage, green beans, buttered potatoes...
  • Drinking: this in.

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  • Current Residence: I am a ghost of Michigan.
  • Interests: Happiness - Music, Poetry, Life, Music - Happiness
  • Favourite movie: The Squid and the Whale
  • Favourite band or musician: Robert Plant, Freddie Mercury, Beatles, Cake, The Police
  • Favourite genre of music: Good Music
  • Favourite artist: Nick Burkhart ( dev:simplest-uno: )
  • Favourite poet or writer: Tolkien, e.e.Cummings, Saul Williams, Chuck Palahniuk, Kurt Vonnegut, Carlos Castenada
  • Shell of choice: Red Koopa
  • Skin of choice: Smooth and scented
  • Favourite game: Risk 2210, Dungeons & Dragons, Pac Man, Guitar Hero, Hackey-sack
  • Favourite gaming platform: NES, Atari, Xbox360
  • Favourite cartoon character: Gambit
  • Personal Quote: <i>Where am I and who have I been?</i>
  • Tools of the Trade: Paper, pen, and life.

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Comments


:iconnephyknight:
I'm sorry that I keep favoritizing peices of your work without leaving comments. I just can't seem to be able to put to words why I like the peices.
:iconrachroars:
thankyou for the friend add stranger

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"I must endure one or two caterpillars if I wish to become aquainted with the butterflies" The Little Prince" by Antoine de Saint-Exupery.
:iconinallgoodtime:
It was the crying piano that hooked me, and when I found out you weren't dedicated to the dark side of emotional conflict (emo) I was stuck. Can I buy you a drink from across the country? Too late.

:beer:

--
Life is a rough draft.
:iconrachroars:
:hug:

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"I must endure one or two caterpillars if I wish to become aquainted with the butterflies" The Little Prince" by Antoine de Saint-Exupery.
:iconmeadowcress:
I don't fav and comment often enough (or ever), so I thought I'd let you know here:

I love your poetry, and usually I read most of it 2-3 times before marking it as read. :)
You're one of my favourite poets.


I'll try to be better, but for now this lousy comment is what you get.

--
We do not write because we want to; we write because we have to.
- W. Somerset Maugham
:iconmeadowcress:
I was just about to leave another comment saying about the same thing. Ironic? Maybe.

It's still true though. Even if I think I prefer some of your older poetry. Less abstract back then. (Not exactly a complaint but)

I don't know, I think you may be overly prolific and under-exposed. (though the first part my just be envy)

I'm rambling on your front page. You probably noticed by now.

--
We do not write because we want to; we write because we have to.
- W. Somerset Maugham
:iconinallgoodtime:
Ramble on flower.


I've been away too long.

--
Life is a rough draft.
:iconsenoy:
Thanks for the watch.
:iconmexy:
omigawdwhatthafuck.

did you seriously delete your entire gallery, short of three poems?

i want them back...

--
Where are we going, and why am I in a handbasket?

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