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About Me Literature / Artist Member InallgoodtimeMale/United States Recent Activity
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  • Mood: Confused
  • Watching: The Prisoner
  • Eating: 40 cent pink cookie swisscakeroll icecream samwich
  • Drinking: Sweet Baby Ray's BBQ
Semicolon.

I am eht error of my ways. Miss Communicate.
I miss the mist.
Was I ever an egg? From day one my beggar brow
spitting out words like orange juice, made an impact
at least splitting his face
might not have been the only way, but reality.

I seem to have lost myself.
Not a serious condition, only a momentary lapse
into the abandoned
open-eyed courtyard of shelter in black in white.

Cartoon romance plastered on flaking gray walls.


In a moment I'll be calm.
Take a buzzard by the arm.
Cup his feathers in your palm.
Big bird broke back heavy charm.
        then coughed up his glob.

And neatly misrepresented, I stutter onto the counter to display my wares:

          One bottle of invisible ink.
          Tamper-proof medicine.
          A safety match half-spent.
          A village map.
          A collapsible universe stuffed into a black hat.
And there I'm interrupted dead. Cut short a foot.

By bitter blade by broken foot
the floorboards have my head.

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  • Current Residence: I am a ghost of Michigan.
  • Interests: Glammer - Music, Poetry, Life, Music - Asymmetry
  • Favourite movie: The Squid and the Whale
  • Favourite band or musician: Robert Plant, Freddie Mercury, Beatles, Cake, The Police
  • Favourite genre of music: Good Music
  • Favourite artist: Nick Burkhart ( dev:simplest-uno: )
  • Favourite poet or writer: Tolkien, e.e.Cummings, Saul Williams, Chuck Palahniuk, Kurt Vonnegut, Carlos Castenada
  • Shell of choice: Red Koopa
  • Skin of choice: Smooth and scented
  • Favourite game: Risk 2210, Dungeons & Dragons, Pac Man, Guitar Hero, Hackey-sack
  • Favourite gaming platform: NES, Atari, Xbox360
  • Favourite cartoon character: Gambit
  • Personal Quote: <i>Where am I and who have I been?</i>
  • Tools of the Trade: Paper, pen, and life.

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:iconcopperrein:
=copperrein Jan 14, 2011  Professional Artisan Crafter
congrats on the DD

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~mode-de-vie Jan 14, 2011  Student Writer
Congratulations on your Daily Deviation! :) I've placed a link to it in the sidebar of my journal page.

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:iconnephyknight:
I'm sorry that I keep favoritizing peices of your work without leaving comments. I just can't seem to be able to put to words why I like the peices.
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:iconrachroars:
thankyou for the friend add stranger

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"I must endure one or two caterpillars if I wish to become aquainted with the butterflies" The Little Prince" by Antoine de Saint-Exupery.
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:iconinallgoodtime:
It was the crying piano that hooked me, and when I found out you weren't dedicated to the dark side of emotional conflict (emo) I was stuck. Can I buy you a drink from across the country? Too late.

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:iconrachroars:
:hug:

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"I must endure one or two caterpillars if I wish to become aquainted with the butterflies" The Little Prince" by Antoine de Saint-Exupery.
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:iconmeadowcress:
I don't fav and comment often enough (or ever), so I thought I'd let you know here:

I love your poetry, and usually I read most of it 2-3 times before marking it as read. :)
You're one of my favourite poets.


I'll try to be better, but for now this lousy comment is what you get.

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We do not write because we want to; we write because we have to.
- W. Somerset Maugham || My NaPo etc. account ~WinterCress
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:iconmeadowcress:
I was just about to leave another comment saying about the same thing. Ironic? Maybe.

It's still true though. Even if I think I prefer some of your older poetry. Less abstract back then. (Not exactly a complaint but)

I don't know, I think you may be overly prolific and under-exposed. (though the first part my just be envy)

I'm rambling on your front page. You probably noticed by now.

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We do not write because we want to; we write because we have to.
- W. Somerset Maugham || My NaPo etc. account ~WinterCress
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:iconinallgoodtime:
Ramble on flower.


I've been away too long.

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Life is a rough draft.
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